Forgotten Kiss by Shankar Murti

An ordinary boy wants a dream lover without knowing that his real love is nearby and it's not ordinary.
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  • #1

    Rachel McAdam (Saturday, 28 July 2012 19:16)

    Sweet story but the events could be made slightly clearer. Some of your thoughts would be better expressed in actions eg. we don't know how he knows the flowers aren't from his stall.

  • #2

    Shankar Murti (Friday, 07 September 2012 18:47)

    Thanks a lot Rachel for liking my script and for giving your valuable remarks. And many many congratulations for your script getting selected in top 50. Best wishes.