The Wish by Paul Woods

Alf now deceased has to come back to see his beloved Meg on Valentines Day after all promise is a promise.
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Comments: 4
  • #1

    Paul Holbrook (Friday, 20 July 2012 16:39)

    Nice little story, but difficult to read in places due to punctuation issues.

  • #2

    Jaye (Friday, 20 July 2012 18:01)

    That is a lovely story, a tiny bit expositional, but very endearing. Love this bit:

    *I promised we would spend every valentine our anniversary together and we will,until we meet in heaven.*

  • #3

    Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:00)

    As said, a few punctuation issues, but it's a nice read. Well done. :)

  • #4

    Nigel Sheppard (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 23:10)

    Nice story Paul, but it could do with a bit of revision. The dialogue, idealistic in places, could do with some work. People don't really speak that way. Leaving that aside, it is a pleasant story.