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Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 11:39)
A fair attempt, however just a suggestion would be to put more emphasis on the former relationship. There's no reason for anyone to suspect the former husband based on what we can see in the script.
Niki (Monday, 23 July 2012 22:27)
This is a nice idea. But there's no mention of Valentine's Day. It felt like it could've done with more tension at the beginning. Also there's lots of dialogue, especially question/answers. Film is a
really visual medium - more "show don't tell". But good effort and I liked the ending.
Vicky Hinault (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 09:41)
Thanks for your comments guys, I already can see how it can be improved with your thoughts and with some hindsight! Thanks again