The Loyalty Points by Soneil Inayat

A man is alone on valentines day after recently splitting from his partner, he still expects a card but the envelope that lands on the floor is far from romantic.
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  • #1

    Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 17:46)

    Where was the first post? Anyway, written well enough, but I think this film needs some closure at the end.

  • #2

    Craig (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 18:54)

    Like a lot of the scripts that didn't get though the kiss is incidental. If you take the kiss out it wouldn't make a difference. Even in this case would she kiss him?