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Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 18:44)
I tried to get this, but after reading it twice I have so many questions in my head. Who is the girl in the photo? Who were the chocolates for? Why is there tension with the girl in the living room,
and why does she disappear the second he comes home? There's no story here for me, it looks like a scene lifted out of a longer script, but we need to know what happened before it to truly understand
Craig (Friday, 27 July 2012)
Waited for something to happen but it never did and you still had half a page left. Don't know what you are trying to say?