Red Ribbon by Gareth Cooper

A young man finds a gift amongst the remnants of a post-apocalyptic world.
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  • #1

    Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 08:17)

    I really like this one, I'm surprised it didn't get through. The only reason I can think is due to it's potential difficulty for film makers to shoot, but if true it's a flimsy reason. Unlucky Gareth.

  • #2

    Craig (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 22:19)

    I don't think it's a flimsy reason for it not getting through. If people can't make it for low cost they'll make another of the 50. Also look at your layout,dialogue is not set up right, if it was would it be longer then 2 pages?