Never Forget Me by Martin White

A shy quiet school boy bring flowers to his loved one following a fatal car crash who doesn't realise he's even there. Or does she?
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Comments: 4
  • #1

    Craig (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 21:22)

    Good idea but maybe needs more at the end. But as I've said about another script, would it be to hard to film a hospital scene?

  • #2

    Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 16:34)

    Nice and touching story here, but I don't understand the bullying. What does it do for the story or the character?

  • #3

    Craig Beachell (Sunday, 29 July 2012 10:02)

    I'm with Nigel on this one. Good story but not sure where the bullying came into it. Maybe you already had the answer to that but you ran out of pages like I did with my script: -)

  • #4

    Martin White (Thursday, 02 August 2012 20:00)

    Well I wanted the character to be a real high school loser who's a quiet, shy guy who is also a target for his class bullies. Someone who secretly loves a stunning high school queen bitch that would never acknowledge him. Probably hard to get those points across in a two page script I guess