Ice Cream Sunday by Ian Armer

Harry and Lisa debate the meaning of love in this short romantic comedy. Inspired by the films of Woody Allen.
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Comments: 7
  • #1

    Jaye (Friday, 20 July 2012 18:59)

    Quite enjoyed the rapid fire banter, could really picture it.

  • #2

    Martin White (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:13)

    Annie Hall immediately sprung to my mind when reading this. Not that that is a bad thing as its one of my favorite films of all time. This could work really well as a film too though.

  • #3

    Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012 20:07)

    Enjoyed that. And an ice cream would work for me too... :)

  • #4

    P. (Sunday, 22 July 2012 19:45)

    Hmm. I'm dubious of all the 5* ratings of this, it's rather average. The dialogue isn't great and feels very artificial. Didn't do much for me, sorry.

  • #5

    Ian Armer (The Writer!) (Sunday, 22 July 2012 23:23)

    Dear P (If that is your real name!)

    I don't go for the friends/family voting system - it's dishonest. Some people honestly like my script, some honestly don't. It's okay to find it average too! :)

    Thanks to everybody who has bothered to read it so far!

    Ian :)

  • #6

    Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 14:10)

    Quite enjoyable I thought, very difficult to get something across in two pages but you did tell an entire story with it. Well done, and unlucky for not making it.

  • #7

    Ian Armer (Monday, 23 July 2012 21:30)

    Many thanks, Nigel! And again, many thanks to everybody who has taken the time to read it (even if you didn't like it!) :)