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Jaye (Friday, 20 July 2012 18:59)
Quite enjoyed the rapid fire banter, could really picture it.
Martin White (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:13)
Annie Hall immediately sprung to my mind when reading this. Not that that is a bad thing as its one of my favorite films of all time. This could work really well as a film too though.
Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012 20:07)
Enjoyed that. And an ice cream would work for me too... :)
P. (Sunday, 22 July 2012 19:45)
Hmm. I'm dubious of all the 5* ratings of this, it's rather average. The dialogue isn't great and feels very artificial. Didn't do much for me, sorry.
Ian Armer (The Writer!) (Sunday, 22 July 2012 23:23)
Dear P (If that is your real name!)
I don't go for the friends/family voting system - it's dishonest. Some people honestly like my script, some honestly don't. It's okay to find it average too! :)
Thanks to everybody who has bothered to read it so far!
Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 14:10)
Quite enjoyable I thought, very difficult to get something across in two pages but you did tell an entire story with it. Well done, and unlucky for not making it.
Ian Armer (Monday, 23 July 2012 21:30)
Many thanks, Nigel! And again, many thanks to everybody who has taken the time to read it (even if you didn't like it!) :)