I Do by Alison Wilkie

A woman attempts to modify her man by matrimony.
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    Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 16:26)

    Angel's dialogue seemed to suggest a twist was coming, and it never did so it felt anti-climatic for me. Also what was the purpose of the beginning bit between Posh Charlie and Jazz? It didn't seem to do anything for the story. Good effort anyway though, keep going.