For You by Sukey Richardson

Boy decides to pay girl a visit on Valentines day
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  • #1

    John (Monday, 23 July 2012 09:32)

    There is much to like about this - very poignant, and I think it would have made the cut if there was less direction about close-ups, repeated scene-heading (INT: LIVING ROOM DAY) and typos (it's self). It was very touching though, and I could picture the story itself being one of the 50.

  • #2

    Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 16:45)

    A nice story Sukey, well told.I hope you have success with it elsewhere.