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Craig (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 22:44)
Maybe beter if we didn't know wife had to go back, how has done it? Dose the wife know? But would she burn her own place down???
Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 17:18)
I don't think your script tells exactly what you wanted to say in the ending, i.e the way you saw it in your head. The ending, which I assume is supposed to be dramatic, is not so. Perhaps a bit a
rewriting would make it better?