Fire Games by Ivana Jelisavac

A professor tries to end his affair with an obsessive student - and faces drastic consequences.
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  • #1

    Craig (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 22:44)

    Maybe beter if we didn't know wife had to go back, how has done it? Dose the wife know? But would she burn her own place down???

  • #2

    Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 17:18)

    I don't think your script tells exactly what you wanted to say in the ending, i.e the way you saw it in your head. The ending, which I assume is supposed to be dramatic, is not so. Perhaps a bit a rewriting would make it better?