The Fountain by Shayna Newham-Jones

Drew loves Amanda more than anything in the world, but how does he propose to her without muttering a word? The Fountain lets you experience Drew's most imaginative proposal, We'd be mad not to say ye
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    Rachel McAdam (Friday, 27 July 2012 18:22)

    A little more white space in the description would make it easier to read, and little things like her going to go to the bathroom to clean her teeth - how do we know that? - could do with straightening out, or dropping to move the story on a little quicker, but otherwise a really sweet idea.