Take Two by Stephen Irwin

A film ends in disaster when two actors kiss.
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    John (Sunday, 29 July 2012 20:07)

    I'm afraid this didn't work at all for me. Although there was a Valentine's Day card on the floor, I got no real sense of this being about what love means. I have to say it felt more like an means of showcasing a few crafted put-downs from the mouths of a couple of unpleasant characters about whom we care nothing. I think giving either or both characters something we can warm to might help, and I would also take the narrative elsewhere - perhaps something more comedic.