Matchless by Roger Laing

A Valentine's Day proposal at the football stadium hasn't gone down well. What chance the replay?
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    John (Monday, 23 July 2012 23:19)

    This has been let down by 'on the nose' dialogue. There's too much telling in the dialogue, rather than showing through the action.