Limerence by Noel Rainford

One man's valentines night companion is depression and hurt.
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  • #1

    Ivy (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 01:09)

    Hey Noel!
    I enjoyed reading your script! However, I found it to be very predictable, it felt a little single-layered. Maybe it's the 2 page restriction. Just trying to give some constructive feedback! Hope you keep rocking scripts :)

  • #2

    Noel (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 00:04)

    Thank you, thinking about it since I should have had the answer machine play over the action and have it all one single continuous scene.