Lily by Teenie Russell

Whilst searching for frog spawn, two kids bond in this bittersweet tale of first love.
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  • #1

    Jayne Lake (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 12:12)

    Enchanting. Super observed dialogue but could do with a bit more balance - dialogue to action - but this doesn't spoil what is a heartwarming/heartbreaking vignette. Bril.

  • #2

    francesca (Thursday, 26 July 2012 23:55)

    very nice vision of love. well structured. well done.

  • #3

    Teenie (Tuesday, 11 September 2012 13:19)

    Thank you very much for your comments.