Last Kiss by Thomas Simpson

A young couple stalked by a mysterious man with a revelation that will destroy their relationship
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Comments: 5
  • #1

    Andy (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 18:48)

    I liked this - nice twist. It makes you wonder what Donna's motive was/is. Keep up the writing, Thomas

  • #2

    Kim (Thursday, 26 July 2012 10:01)

    Chilling. Liked it a lot. Well done Thomas and bad luck on not making it through to the long list.

  • #3

    Thomas (Thursday, 26 July 2012 13:57)

    Thanks for the feedback guys.

    I have a reason for Donna doing what she did, but I like leaving
    it up to individual interpretation ;)

  • #4

    Su Hoyle (Friday, 27 July 2012 04:54)

    Nice twist!

  • #5

    John (Sunday, 29 July 2012 19:51)

    I enjoyed this. Cant see why it didn't make the longlist. Hope someone picks it up