Carnwarth by Donald Rae

The secret language that everyone speaks.
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    Michelle Golder (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 15:29)

    I quite like this. Didn't get it at all until the end though. And not sure how well it would work for film...I didn't get how the other passengers could hear what he's keying? I guess it's all part of the surrealism. It made me smile, anyway.

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    Donald Rae (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 17:29)

    Thank you Michelle. I have exactly the same reservations! I have another version (running to four pages) in which I attempted to deal with these points. May I send it to you? I would appreciate your comments.