Before Tomorrow by Frances Beldia

romantic love lost between two best friends. After a passionate kiss on Jim's rooftop, Jim tells Belinda he's moving away for good. Belinda turns away going back to her own life as a wife & mother.
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    Michelle Golder (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 15:22)

    I like the set up and the first two lines. But the story happened too quickly for me. I felt I knew nothing about these two as people so couldn't care so much about their heartbreak. Less expositional dialogue would have helped, I think.