Lips Stick by Damien St John

An arguing couple get more than they bargained for on Valentine's night when their lips... Stick
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    Tall Paul (Sunday, 24 February 2013 17:28)

    Nice concept. Personally I think this script would be stronger if there was a REASON they are angry with each other, and that was resolved. For example, unbeknownst to the reader, the man and woman had lost a child and their anger at each other was due to this. As the resolution of the script, their love of their lost child and their own love prevails over their anger, and they continue the kiss for real... and THAT unlocks their lips. This is a shootable movie and has both comedy and pathos, a good combination. tall paul in jax at yahoo dot com.