You'll Never Forget Your First Kiss by Craig Miles

Your first kiss is something you'll remember??
You'll never forget you first kiss by Cr
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    Gwyn (Sunday, 12 August 2012 05:52)

    Great twist at the end, good little script. With a few tweaks could be a fun comedy. The girl stomping off at the end was too typical, Nan should have been given the punchline, but well done.

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    sarah (Saturday, 11 August 2012 11:50)

    Great, really enjoyed it, should of made the top 50.