Telepathic Lovers by Benjamin Nkomo

Seperated by space and time, two soulmates who have never met before only communicate with their minds.
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    BD Geldart (Saturday, 11 August 2012 10:06)

    In my mind I couldn't picture the movie, it sounded more poetic than cinematic. I was reading a blog about writing emotional action scenes I.e writing in a journal and tears falling onto the page to represent loss or sadness. Hope and desire are difficult to convey physically. Perhaps more than 2 pages were required to declare a theme and premise. On a separate note midnoon doesn't exist, just noon or midday.