Making Time by Sean Breathnach

Brian's girlfriend is taking the train and is leaving for good. He never made enough time for her. Today he has a chance to prove that he can change, even if everything is going against him.
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Comments: 1
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    John (Friday, 10 August 2012 23:21)

    I thought there was too much exposition in the dialogue. A nice story that could have been told visually.