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Carly Godfrey-Bridger (Monday, 20 August 2012 15:08)
Ahhh! Yes I get you and agreed, 2 pages = no room for back story! I did want to know what happened next...and before!
Marque Pierre Sondergaard (Saturday, 18 August 2012 21:10)
Thanks for the read and comment Carly.
Well, 2 pages. Not much to develop the whole back story, and then have a plot turn and a future direction for the story. So I focused on the latter 2. My goals for this exercise was to have a scene
that could reasonably stand on its own, didn't break any dramatic rules and hopefully made the reader want to guess what would happen next.
Carly Godfrey-Bridger (Monday, 13 August 2012 13:02)
I liked the story, but I don't understand how they missed each other? If they are both upset about being jilted, they must have both turned up. Or am I missing something?