Blind Luck by Marque Pierre Sondergaard

Two jilted lovers are frustratingly close to healing each other's broken heart.
Blind Luck - 50 Kisses - Marque Pierre S
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    Carly Godfrey-Bridger (Monday, 20 August 2012 15:08)

    Ahhh! Yes I get you and agreed, 2 pages = no room for back story! I did want to know what happened next...and before!

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    Marque Pierre Sondergaard (Saturday, 18 August 2012 21:10)

    Thanks for the read and comment Carly.

    Well, 2 pages. Not much to develop the whole back story, and then have a plot turn and a future direction for the story. So I focused on the latter 2. My goals for this exercise was to have a scene that could reasonably stand on its own, didn't break any dramatic rules and hopefully made the reader want to guess what would happen next.

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    Carly Godfrey-Bridger (Monday, 13 August 2012 13:02)

    I liked the story, but I don't understand how they missed each other? If they are both upset about being jilted, they must have both turned up. Or am I missing something?