'Enough' by Puzzle Pictures
(London, UK) First Edit
London based filmmaker Maureen Hascoet teamed up with producer Anna Zalane to produce short film 'Enough', starring Natalia Tena (Harry Potter, Games of Throne), Simeon Willis and Brona C Titley - for the 50 Kisses competition.
First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers
- Too long – trim head and tail
- Sound needs work as dialogue is lost in places
- Atmos feels heavy and oppressive
- Consider ADR as dialogue is so lost in the live sound
- Create a world beyond the shots – are they at a party? If so, let’s hear it.
- Add foley too, it will make your actors feel even more real
- Nicely played though.