'Advice' by Thorny Devil Productions
(London, UK/Los Angeles, CA, USA) First Edit
Thorny Devil Productions are a London and L.A.-based production company, formed in 2010. Our 50 Kisses entry was Directed by James Card, from Ross Aitken's script; DoP Daniel D Moses; Executive Producer Jennifer Taylor Lawrence; Original Music by Bart Warshaw. The film was shot on a Nikon DSLR.
Read Advice HERE
First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers
- Drop line ‘I fell in the Ocean’ by the girl, her performance here is letting the film down
- Of all the bars line over mixed / recorded
- Try finding a film filter with scratches and make the sound crackly so it looks more like a crappy old print form the forties.
- End feels redundant – this is about him facing fear, whether she likes him or not is secondary. Consider ending at 2:04 just before he says hi, then cut to black with punchy music