Romantic Hideaway by Kulvinder Gill Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Romantic Hideaway by Kulvinder Gill Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We felt it was a strong script. However, perhaps we need to read a little more into the breakfast assembling scene. Is there a way you can further misdirect the audience? Or make them feel
that something isn’t quite right, but we can’t quite put our fingers on it?
2. Consider whether you need the last shot of the house. It might be difficult for a filmmaker working primarily in an urban setting to shoot.
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