Priceless by Vanessa Yardley Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Priceless by Vanessa Yardley Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. Consider your set up of the prostitutes life. Is this life one that the woman is happy with? Would she want to escape if it is presented to her? If so, this needs to be reflected. Although it
is largely the boys story, you give her the chance to escape at the end – so we need to think she may or may not take it. Raise the stakes for her.
2. Would the other lads stay around when their friend is getting beaten up? Would they scarper?
Have your say, what do you think?