Practice Makes Perfect by Mark Pallis Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Practice Makes Perfect by Mark Pallis Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. Consider changing the pumpkin to something else - 1) It is unlikely to be in season in Feb 2) We can see that this is the progression of kiss, to something with a face, but can you think of something else that would work equally as well?
2. Consider changing the cinema location to something else - think about what a lo-to-no budget filmmaker will be able to source.
Have your say, what do you think?