Don't by Arron Ferguson Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
Don't by Arron Ferguson Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We liked this script, thought it was original but felt the ending didn't quite work as it is currently written. Perhaps either end it on the question – what are they going to do? Are they
going to jump? Or reframe it, and have the final scene on the ground with people looking up at something falling down, which turns out to be the tennis ball. That way it keeps the suspense – we
don’t see their decision, but we understand it visually. They are not going to jump. It also means the tennis ball becomes a symbol and its inclusion in the end gives another reason as to why it
is there is the first place.
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