A Glasgow Kiss by Larry Diamond Draft 2
A Glasgow Kiss by Larry Diamond Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. Filmmaker note – because of the nature of the dialogue in this script, be advised that the film will live or die on your casting. So make sure you get it right!
2. We felt the script should start when the two men come into the pub – before that, the shots are just establishing the area. Cutting this out will also afford you more space in the script.
3. Although the presence of Valentine's balloons are established early in the script, we felt that using one of the balloons as a way of getting to the kiss was a little forced. Is there a way you can get to the Glasgow Kiss without pulling this in?
Have your say, what do you think?