60 Year Valentine by Marc Lockier Draft 2
Draft Two Comments... have YOUR say!
60 Year Valentine by Marc Lockier Draft 1
Draft One Producers Development Notes for the author
1. We liked this concept and felt the tone and texture of the script will complement others in the film.
2. Consider keeping the couple dancing throughout the sequences rather than – in some cases – going off to the side and coming back in. By letting the change of their circumstances and life happen around them, it almost becomes a dance through time and love. You will need to work closely with whatever filmmaker chooses to do this film to get the sequencing right in this film as it is a very visual piece.
3. Consider ended the film with the woman going to sit down. Not the ghostly dance. We will get that she is alone Could her husband spin her to the side and then disappear?
4. Read the other 50 Kisses script First, Last, Best – It is quite a similar theme. How can you differentiate yourself from this script?
Have your say, what do you think?